Sunday, June 16, 2013

Cooking

Cooking

Claire cooked a carrot quickly.
She then was going to make a cake to bake.
She went to the store in a jiffy.
She did not know how long it would take.
She then bought some apples.
Alice ate apples in the afternoon with the cake.
Daniel didn't do anything to help but instead ate a sample
After eating so much, they all had a tooth ache.


Analysis

This poem is about a busy day of going to the grocery store, eating food and getting a tooth ache. This poem is like a English sonnet in the beginning but stops the particular rhyme scheme in line 6. The rhyme scheme is A-B-A-B-C-A-C-A. This poem has alliteration in line 1 "Claire cooked a carrot quickly," line 6 "Alice ate apples in the afternoon," and line 7 "Daniel didn't do anything to help but instead ate a sample." There is assonance/consonance in line 2 "make a cake to bake."

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